Hello...
Drop by drop they roll down
Moment by moment it fills the heart
Step by step he goes away
Everything in between is falling apart
Walk by walk the memories come
Each memory has a story
Story by story I sink again
With a sure hope of no glory
Round by round I spin the thread
Thread by thread the love grows
Suddenly the thread s broken
What have I lost, no one knows
Hope by hope I swim to the shore
Effort by effort I proceed
A chain in my legs stops me
However hard I try, I cannot succeed
Ray of hope seems to be away
But I'm determined to find my way
Wave by wave I get stronger
I feel my chains would break away.
-By Esabella
Liked it very much, Esabella. Expresses your emotional predicament very clearly.
ReplyDeleteThank you NP. I'm happy that you liked it. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad to see that you are back writing again Esabella. Hope to read more from you too. Nice Poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Esabella, very profound poem highlighting explicit emotions:)Great job!
ReplyDeleteAn explicit description of being in a dark place, with a light @ the end of the tunnel.
ReplyDeleteWell done Esabella.
Cheers, ic
Very nice. Always love the stories of doubt and dispare(sp) that have a glimmer of hope and redemption. Wonderfully done!
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